Category: Writing

Review the following sentence using
tactful, courteous language. Focus on
the issue Remove inappropriate
phrases Search online for ideas about
violence on television and present a
strong argument. -1 review the
following sentence using tactful,
courteous language. Focus on the
issue Remove inappropriate phrases
What is an online ideas about violence
on television and present a strong
argument. -Issue Violence on
television -Incorrect Everybody knows
that teenagers watch violence on
television. 2. Review the following issue
and what  is a sentence that mentions a
common ground with the opposing
viewpoint. -what is an online ideas
against and ideas in favor of children
playing computer games -Find a point
on which both sides of the argument have in common or share -Use appropriate vocabulary: agree, think,believe, approve, accept as true, support, admit, recognize Mention a Common Ground Issue Children
Playing Computer games 3. Read the
issue and your argument. -what is an
online ideas differing or opposing
homeschooling. -what ideal sentence that
recognize the differing (opposing)
viewpoint Recognize Differing
viewpoint Issue Homeschooling Your
argument A recent article finds that
homeschooling is an ideal way for
students to obtain quality education. 4
Read the issue and your argument. –
What is an online idea about
childhood obesity in schools that you
believe has credibility. -what ideal
sentence grant the merits of
differing viewpoint -Begin the
sentence with It is acceptable or It is
admissible. Issue Childhood Obesity in
schools grant the merits of differing
viewpoint Your argument However, admissible. Issue Childhood Obesity in
schools grant the merits of differing
viewpoint Your argument However,
schools need to provide healthy
lifestyle choices to decrease
childhood obesity. 5. Read the issue
and your argument. -what is a strong online idea about the importance of
emergency medical care (CPR) for
employees. -what is an ideal sentence
to rebut the differing viewpoint -Begin
the sentence with However or
Although Issue Emergency Medical
Care (CPR) Your argument A group of
employees do not want to take training
in Emergency Medical Care (CPR).
Rebut the differing viewpoint

1. For people who are covered by the PSR, license holders must evaluate how person-centered the services are at least every 6 months.
True
False
2. A permitted procedure means a procedure that is permitted but only with professional oversight.
True
False
3. The Positive Supports Rule applies to everyone receiving licensed support services in Minnesota.
True
False
4. There are a few specific types of person-centered planning listed and allowed in the PSR.
True
False
5. Executives, owners and managers of providers must complete only the core training as described in the Positive Supports Rule.
True
False
. Prohibited procedures that are only used once or twice do not require a Positive Support Transition Plan.
True
False
7. The Positive Supports Rule requires that all professionals have competence in their roles.
True
False
8. Positive support and positive behavior support are the same thing.
True
False
9. 245D is a statute that applies to all licensed Home and Community Based Service options in MN.
True
False
10. A prohibited procedure, such as time out, cannot be used in a licensed service unless there is a direct approval from the Commissioner of DHS.
True
False

**ANSWER WORTH THE MARKS**
On the book “Tweaked” by Katherine Holubitsky
Gordie Jessup is a good kid, but he’s living in a nightmare. His older brother’s two-year addiction to crystal meth has left their family emotionally and fictional drained. And just when Gordie thinks he can no longer stand the manipulating, the lying and the stealing, things get even worse.
**THIS SUMMARY IS ONLY HERE SO YOU KNOW WHICH BOOK I AM TALKING ABOUT**
a. Make an 66-Wods Summary of the book (10 marks)
• Must use exactly 66 wods to
summarize your novel.
• Content fully explains the novel, and
important plot points with adequate
diction. No plot is missing.
•Tone is persuading and adequate, and
captures the essence of the novel.
Audience clearly understands the novel.
b. Make an editorial of the book (40 MARKS)
• Focus on a current issue or topic –
choose one real life topic that connects
to issue in your book. (e.g., addictions,
abuse, loss, etc.)
• Identify the purpose (e.g., criticize,
condemn, advise, commend,
congratulate)
• Develop a thesis statement that clearly
defines the issue and attends to the
purpose
• Conduct research to collect evidence
and to provide examples
• Craft an introduction that states the
writer’s view and captures the
audience’s attention
• Use evidence and ethical, logical
arguments to support the thesis
statement and purpose, and to persuade
the audience
• Construct an effective conclusion
related to the purpose and thesis
statement.
c. Make an SONG of the book (10 MARKS)
– Song must include a chorus relevant to
the novel.
– Song must include at least 3, 4-line
verses.
d. Make a Movie Poster of the book (10 MARKS)
– Movie poster must include title.
– Poster must include image that is a
major symbol in the novel.
– Poster must include 3 + actors (real
life) who accurately portray their
characters.
– Poster must include a quote from the
novel.
– Poster must include “featured song.”
e. Make an QUILT (10 MARKS)
– Quilt must include 10 + squares that
are relevant to the novel.
– Squares must include 5 + quotations
and 2 + pictures.

Describe two (2) examples of inappropriate behaviour that learners may demonstrate in a group-based training situation typical to your workplace.
For each example, describe at least one (1) strategy you could use to effectively manage the behaviour.

“My Old Newcastle”
Imprints
, p. 296
For the following questions, be sure to answer fully with specific details/examples that are well-explained.
2. Explain the author’s use of “and” to begin sentences. What purpose does it serve or effect does it have? (In other words, why begin with “and” instead of in proper sentence form?)
3. Find an example of a sentence fragment (incomplete thought) in the essay and suggest why it was used. Do not use a sentence that begins with “and”.
4. What does the author’s use of the four seasons add to the essay? Consider coherence and unity.

5. Essay 1.2 – Paragraph 1 ends with “The four primary strategies of camouflage include concealing coloration, disruptive coloration, disguise, and mimicry.” How does the conclusion return to this idea? 6. Essay 1.2 – Does the writer offer a suggestion, give an opinion, or make a prediction? University Canada West 2022 4 of 4
With disguise, some animals resemble specific elements of their surroundings rather than their environment as a whole. The insect known as a walking stick looks very much like a stick, so it is difficult to find it when looking at a tree or bush. Another insect species is referred to as leaf insects or walking leaves because their bodies so closely look like the plants where they live. Animals camouflage themselves in the seas and oceans as well. The tan coloring and markings of flatfish make them almost impossible to recognize due to the sand around them, despite changes in tides that disturb the ocean’s floor. Concealing coloration helps animals to blend into their surroundings and create a visual illusion. For example, the white coats or feathers of many animals living in arctic zones, such as polar bears and snowy owls, allow them to blend into the background. If a predator looks across a white snow-covered field, it is difficult to pick out its white prey. Moreover, some animals can change their colors. Stevens (2016) points out the role of concealment in camouflage: “One likely advantage is that color change enables animals to cope with varying backgrounds and unpredictable environments” (p. 98). None of these strategies of camouflage is more effective than the other, and they all show the range of normal possibilities that nature offers animals to survive. Many animals combine camouflage with their “fight or flight” responses, which gives them additional time to decide whether they should stay and fight or flee. Furthermore, animals that use camouflage for protection share a conspicuous problem as well; as Emlen (2014) observes, “Animals that panic, dashing from their hiding places at the wrong time, or animals that walk or fly with the wrong gait, can break camouflage with deadly consequences” (p. 18). The most effective camouflages keep animals safe from their predators. Whether by concealing coloration, disruptive coloration, disguise, or mimicry, animals need the protections of camouflage if they are to escape their natural foes. I. Read the conclusion paragraphs from Essays 1.1. and 1.2 (above) and answer the questions. Then think about which one you think is the most effective and why. Type your answer on the line under each question. 1. Essay 1.1 – What key words does the writer use from the introduction paragraph? 2. Essay 1.1 – Paragraph 1 ends with “Societies should not rely solely on electronic systems for voting because elections are too important to trust to computers.” How does the conclusion return to this idea? 3. Essay 1.1 – Does the writer offer a suggestion, give an opinion, or make a prediction? 4. Essay 1.2 – What key words does the writer use from the introduction paragraph? University Canada West 2022 3 of 4
Course 030 CAMPUS-Summer-03 Name Date 030 Comparing Conclusions ESSAY 1.1 APA Against E-Voting 1 Can computer technology be used to steal an election? For the most part, innovative technologies promise to make people’s lives easier and more comfortable, but these innovations can also be a risk, particularly to democratic processes. Societies should not rely solely on electronic systems for voting because elections are too important to trust to computers. 2 In years past, people voted on paper ballots with a pen. Voters could look over their ballots to ensure that they did not make a mistake. Also, when there was a dispute over the results of an election, paper ballots allowed election officials to count votes by hand. This process was tedious, but the results could be easily verified to see if there were any discrepancies between counts. Several countries still use this traditional system of voting, and it provides a crucial foundation for ensuring fairness. 3 Today, however, voters cannot be sure whether electronic voting systems are reliably counting their votes. For example, a computer hacker could develop a program that redirected a person’s vote from one candidate to another. Although some people might think this is unlikely, problems with computer security have occurred throughout the world. The simple fact is that hackers can break into many computer systems for their own purposes. By illegally entering an online polling site, they could change the outcome of an election. Jones and Simons (2012) warn of such a possibility: “a risk of Internet voting is that the computer receiving the voted ballots could be attacked over the Internet by individual hackers, political operatives, foreign governments, or terrorists” (p. 269). Citizens should also question whether electronic voting enhances the voting process. As the old saying goes, “If something isn’t broken, don’t fix it.” 4 If a government decides to use an electronic voting system, it should ensure that all voters receive receipts for their votes that could then be collected for subsequent verification. These receipts would clearly indicate that the vote had gone to the selected candidate. Furthermore, if any candidate suspects that an election is unfair, these receipts could be counted by hand and checked against the computer results. At the very least, as Hale, Montjoy, and Brown (2015) argue, voting should be a simple, secure, and consistent process, regardless of the voting procedure being used. 5 Computer technologies have improved the quality of our lives vastly, but these technologies are not a cure for all of society’s needs. Sometimes a little more human work ensures a better, fairer result. Since voting is critically important to the effective working of society, governments should not rely only on computers for all elections. References Hale, K., Montjoy, R., & Brown, M. (2015). Administering elections. New York: Palgrave Macmillan. Jones, D., & Simons, B. (2012). Broken ballots: Will your vote count? Stanford, CA: CSLI Publications. University Canada West 2022 1 of 4
Please note: the body paragraphs are not in the correct order. Please refer to your homework from last Friday for the correct order. ESSAY 1.2 APA Camouflage for Survival 1 The animals that can live the longest are the ones that hide the best. Animals must protect themselves from predators if they are to survive and reproduce, and many accomplish this goal through camouflage. If they hide themselves well, their predators will not see them and thus will not eat them. Camouflage is the end result of many evolutionary factors, but it develops primarily as a response to animals’ environments. By blending in with their surroundings, animals greatly reduce the chance that a predator will locate and kill them. The four primary strategies of camouflage include concealing coloration, disruptive coloration, disguise, and mimicry. With mimicry, an animal’s coloring makes it resemble another, more dangerous creature so that they are virtually identical. The red, black, and yellow rings of scarlet kingsnakes resemble those of coral snakes. Scarlet kingsnakes are not poisonous, but coral snakes are one of the deadliest species of reptiles. Consequently, the coloring of scarlet kingsnakes scares away their predators, who mistake them for venomous snakes and do not target them for a meal. Animals such as zebras and giraffes show disruptive coloration. It may seem strange to think that zebras camouflage themselves through their stripes since these features appear quite distinctive to humans. The main predators of zebras, however, are lions, and they are colorblind. Thus, a zebra’s stripes help the zebra to blend in with the landscapes of grassy plains. Due to their height, giraffes are among the most easily recognized animals on the planet, yet their disruptive coloring allows them to blend in with trees, particularly when they are young and vulnerable. Disruptive coloration creates an optical illusion for predators, tricking them about what stands right before their eyes, and so these animals are rarely detected. University Canada West 2022 2 of 4

The word (applied) is revised to the word (application) in the paraphrased sentence below. Which technique is used here? Original sentence: We studied the statistics then applied for funding. Paraphrased sentence: After studying the statistics, we made an application for fundings. reorder substitute word class change voice substitute single word ©®O®
‘Research data suggests that girls who witnessed maternal abuse may tolerate abuse as adults more than girls who did not.’ Which sentence is closest in meaning for the sentence above? A Girls who testify about maternal abuse tolerate abuse as adults more readily. B Women who witnessed the abuse of their mother as teens are more likely to become abusive adults. Women who observed the abuse of their mothers when they were young are more likely to endure abuse themselves. D Women who were abused as children are more likely to abuse their own children.
Which technique is used in the underlined phrase in the paraphrased sentence? Original sentence Every year, the town of Vinci, Italy receives as many as 500,000 visitors – people coming in search of its most famous son, Leonardo. Paraphrased sentence Although a small town, Vinci is visited by many tourists because it is the birthplace of Leonardo da Vinci. A Substituting word forms B Changing voice Substituting phrase D Substituting word
Question 7 When you paraphrase it is important that you … A include your opinion. B include
in-text citations. C change meanings. D only use one technique to paraphrase the ideas.
Which technique is used in the underlined phrase in the paraphrased sentence? O_riginal sentence Scientists also discovered a wound on one of his hands. This told them that he had likely been in a ?ght and that his enemies later chased after and killed him. Paraphrased sentence In addition, the discovery of an injury on one of his hands led scientists to believe that he had been in a ?ght before he was murdered. ® Substituting word forms Substituting phrase
‘It has been reported that the richest one per cent Americans own 40% of the country’s wealth! Which sentence is closest in meaning for the sentence above? CA) 40% of the country’s wealth is in the hands of only 1% of Americans. The richest 1% are 40 times as wealthy as the rest of Americans. G) If the gap between rich and poor continues to grow at the current rate, the richest one per cent will soon own 40% of the country’s wealth. ® 99% of Americans own 40% as much as the richest 1%.
All the below should be followed when you paraphrase except ® do not add or delete ideas.
do not use include details. 6:) do not copy sentences or parts of the sentences from the
original. ([9 do not replace all words in a sentence with synonyms.

Subject Verb Location for questions 1-3 1. Every year, the unruly plunderers take over the city in honor of the mythical legendary pirate Jose Gaspar. (A) Jose Gaspar: honor (B) Plunderers: take (C) Plunderers: take over 2. The original members of Ye Mystic Krewe of Gasparilla stormed Tampa on horseback before becoming seaworthy in 1911. (A) Ye Mystic Krewe of Gasparilla: stormed (B) members: stormed (C) Gasparilla: stormed 3. Following a bloody battle, the U.S. Navy ship crew reigned victorious. (A) crew: reigned (B) U.S. Navy ship crew: reigned (C) U.S. Navy ship crew: reigned victorious

Logical fallacies are any flaws in reasoning. These weaken arguments, but sometimes they can work in distracting people from the original argument and subject. In literature, they can reveal aspects of a character. Pick one character and examine his or her logical fallacies in Act II. What are they? What do they convey about this character?
(for context this comes from a ‘ACT ll worksheet’ for the book ‘The Crucible’ the one about the Salem witch trials)