The writer wants to avoid revealing any potential
bias in sentence 3 (reproduced below).
Many people are excited about these new
technologies, and, as civil engineering
professor and infrastructure expert Shoshanna
Saxe explains, they are intended to improve
infrastructure by collecting data and
responding automatically.
Which of the following versions of the
underlined portion of sentence 3 would best
accomplish this goal?
(A) (as it is now)
(B) excessively dismissive civil engineering professor Shoshanna Saxe notes
(C) civil engineering professor and startlingly insightful critic Shoshanna Saxe notes
(D) civil engineering professor Shoshanna Saxe scornfully observes
(E) civil engineering professor Shoshanna Saxe cleverly declares
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